03-24-2014, 01:57 PM
Just a minor thing I came across:
"Sailors are air breathers like dolphins or porpoises and fill much the same ecological niche on their world. They are water breathers and can fill their shells with water and collapse their sails to sink beneath the surface..."
Suggestion: clarify air vs. water breathing, or establish that they can breath both air and water.
[EG] Sailor
"Sailors are air breathers like dolphins or porpoises and fill much the same ecological niche on their world. They are water breathers and can fill their shells with water and collapse their sails to sink beneath the surface..."
Suggestion: clarify air vs. water breathing, or establish that they can breath both air and water.
[EG] Sailor
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