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I think this population has to be revised.
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This reminds me Ozymandias.
And on the pedestal these words appear:
'My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!'
Nothing beside remains. Round the decay
Of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare
The lone and level sands stretch far away.[1]
^ Percy Bysshe Shelley, "Ozymandias"
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Quote:10400 - The population of the Impossible Dyson reaches 22 trillion; Venus population reaches 2 billion
I think this population has to be revised.
Quote:the Paradigm might be brewing some "offspring expansion spheres" in the periphery, the Amalgamation wants in as usual ("Feed me!"), the NoCoZo is trying to make a buck from all of this, Keter doesn't answer calls ("Keter is not in right now, It is contemplating the All. Please call again next kalpa"),
This part looks like something comic, or humorous, not like an encyclopedia.
Quote:. Every civilisation from the distant past has fallen eventually; will the same thing happen one day to civilisation in the Orion Arm?
This reminds me Ozymandias.
And on the pedestal these words appear:
'My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!'
Nothing beside remains. Round the decay
Of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare
The lone and level sands stretch far away.[1]
^ Percy Bysshe Shelley, "Ozymandias"
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