08-17-2016, 02:31 AM
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Sapients and Clades
This is the largest division &emdash; both in terms of numbers and diversity &emdash; of hominid
should be
This is the largest division — both in terms of numbers and diversity — of hominid
(&emdash; -> — )
or
This is the largest division -- both in terms of numbers and diversity -- of hominid
The nature of which these differences depends
should be
The nature of these differences depends
uploads were once physical &emdash; either organic or vec &emdash; but have since transferred
should be
uploads were once physical — either organic or vec — but have since transferred
or
uploads were once physical -- either organic or vec -- but have since transferred
Sapients and Clades
This is the largest division &emdash; both in terms of numbers and diversity &emdash; of hominid
should be
This is the largest division — both in terms of numbers and diversity — of hominid
(&emdash; -> — )
or
This is the largest division -- both in terms of numbers and diversity -- of hominid
The nature of which these differences depends
should be
The nature of these differences depends
uploads were once physical &emdash; either organic or vec &emdash; but have since transferred
should be
uploads were once physical — either organic or vec — but have since transferred
or
uploads were once physical -- either organic or vec -- but have since transferred
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