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Project Heavenstorm (Chapter One of my novel)
Thank you for the comments and grammar suggestions, Dfleymmes.  I welcome any further constructive suggestions regarding the prologue and characters.

One of the ironies of writing this novel is that the prologue is literally the last thing I wrote.  For a while, I was undecided as to how or where the novel should begin, given the nature of the setting and characters.

Gabrielle Gilson and SwanSword will be properly introduced about 1/5 of the way into the novel.  The story is basically a "magic meets technology" scenario in the style of Peter F Hamilton's Night's Dawn Trilogy or Julian May's Saga of the Exiles.

That means you get to see Dragons fighting robots.   Smile

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RE: Project Heavenstorm (Chapter One of my novel) - by DarrenRyding - 11-04-2019, 05:51 PM

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