05-08-2021, 12:54 PM
I'm thinking of cutting out most of Vithan's flight to New Kesalzhin Island at the start of Chapter One. The chapter should begin with him waking up and looking down on the island for the first time in years.
The Prologue with the AIs Probe Seven and Hygraxil should stay where it is, as their role in Books 2 and 3 will be considerable. The planet Haloken is a quasi-magical anomaly in the middle of a sprawling, super-advanced galactic civilization. One is a serious threat to the other. Can you guess which one?
The Prologue with the AIs Probe Seven and Hygraxil should stay where it is, as their role in Books 2 and 3 will be considerable. The planet Haloken is a quasi-magical anomaly in the middle of a sprawling, super-advanced galactic civilization. One is a serious threat to the other. Can you guess which one?