Stand at Carpo

[Ace009]

Ok, so an alternate history scenario that you'v created and are working to extend at least some centuries into the future. Got it

In that case, if you can copy/paste the story that you presented into the forum, we can work on pointing out specific parts that could use some tweaking.

If you would prefer to leave it in google docs, we can probably work with that, it will just take a bit longer. I'm not hugely familiar with google docs, but see there is apparently an option to add comments to a document, giving a means to provide feedback.

Would you rather we do it that way instead of copy/pasting the story into the forum for review?

Thanks!

Todd

I can do that, just not in this post thread. I will start a different thread with the same story copy-pasted.