12-24-2018, 10:04 AM
(12-24-2018, 07:23 AM)Drashner1 Wrote: Neat!The "Biology and Background" Section needs expansion in the first paragraph. I also think their technology needs to be fleshed out, as they may be very low tech on their worlds but would still need quite an infrastructure to settle an interstellar empire. Their relatively "low-tech" existence on planets may be attributed to the lack of an oxidizing atmosphere which limits fire, not to mention ammonia and various nitrogen-compounds are very reactive in an oxidizing atmosphere. We could have them utilize a well-developed space elevator/orbital ring network on their worlds which is where the bulk of their technological activity would take place.
Bouncing this up against the existing Soft Ones article, what parts do you see as needing adjustment and/or expansion?
For that matter, would you like to take a shot at updating/expanding the Soft Ones article, or would you prefer to point out what needs changing and have someone else do the typing?
Thanks!
Todd
I would be interested in taking a shot at updating the article, just want to clear my ideas before updating to make sure they mesh with the larger universe.