04-08-2016, 01:26 AM
Not seeing any show stoppers with that 
a few general comments:
1) The lack of organisation/efficiency in the inner sphere is more likely because there wasn't as much cooperation when they were built, as opposed to the most efficient method not having been figured out.
2) The distances between wormholes is huge, at least 650AU (13x further than Pluto to the sun). "Layovers" likely aren't a thing, instead you'd just adjust your travel time between gates to fit with traffic control. Given beam riders likely litter relay systems it might not even be in your control
3) Historically we've treated the nexus as an apolitical project. Something that no one empire lays claim over, even the sections within their empire. Might be good to bear in mind.
a few general comments:1) The lack of organisation/efficiency in the inner sphere is more likely because there wasn't as much cooperation when they were built, as opposed to the most efficient method not having been figured out.
2) The distances between wormholes is huge, at least 650AU (13x further than Pluto to the sun). "Layovers" likely aren't a thing, instead you'd just adjust your travel time between gates to fit with traffic control. Given beam riders likely litter relay systems it might not even be in your control
3) Historically we've treated the nexus as an apolitical project. Something that no one empire lays claim over, even the sections within their empire. Might be good to bear in mind.
OA Wish list:
- DNI
- Internal medical system
- A dormbot, because domestic chores suck!