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October Updates 
 Darwin 19, 54 AT ([b]October 31, 2022)[/b]
updated articles : 

The silent ones 
https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/4802965d60802

shinogi update by Extherian
https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4d5c38316aca2

Ross 614 update by Datapackrat
https://orionsarm.com/eg-article/4ba1f99323bf1

Nanomusic update by crossroads
https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/46ccd59b979e9

-The 'Terran Federation' has been changed to the 'Terragen Federation'  throughout most of the EG. 

Art 

Animated version by Gann the Derpimann of the Story "Mooclick the Muuh and the Time Machine" by Eric Lo (2011) 
https://www.orionsarm.com/xcms.php?r=oa-...k_the_muuh




-various articles with minor updates??
I see a whole bunch of minor edits by crossroads and Todd?
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#2
Maybe add Systems and Worlds topic page? https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45bc1f1fca9ca

5 paragraphs long, the last 2 paragraphs were entirely rewritten and basically constitute an update on the total number of systems and population size averages.
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#3
sounds good
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#4
Will add + xenosophont names + dandyman ‘s updates

Biowar+ biowar egg
https://orionsarm.com/eg-article/460db67bc3884

Daharran+ daharran unity 
https://orionsarm.com/eg-article/462d55832c31b
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#5
Ross 614 needs to be fixed, but I'm not sure what it's supposed to be. The current 2nd paragraph ends in a period mid-sentence, then the 3rd paragraph reiterates similar material but then diverges.
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#6
The second paragraph should be deleted altogether, since it has been superseded by the third.
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#7
I know it's a little belated to bring this up, but since we mention things like the new names of Hamilton Institute xenosophonts and the name change of the Terragen Federation, do we also want to mention that nowadays we consider the first true megacorps to have arisen in the Federation era rather than being present prior to the Technocalypse as used to be longtime canon?

We updated Origin of Megacorporations specifying that, but in itself this article is in large part pretty similar to how it used to be, just with "megacorp" replaced with "corporation" for the pre-Fed era. There's other articles where we replaced the terms too, but not all of the relevant ones yet. So I'm not sure if this terminological shift is worth mentioning or not, but for completeness I bring it up here.
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#8
I've added an image to the Nanomusic article,
and edited the Ross 614 article a bit more. I'm sure that DataPackRat had quite a lot of input into that article, so I’ve credited him as well.
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(11-07-2022, 08:26 AM)stevebowers Wrote: I've added an image to the Nanomusic article,
and edited the Ross 614 article a bit more. I'm sure that DataPackRat had quite a lot of input into that article, so I’ve credited him as well.

 Datapackrat is Daniel Eliot Boese's username , so I assume one name or the other should be used.
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#10
Since Daniel is now credited as an author, the mention of DataPackRat can be removed, which I've now done.
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