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My (hopefully) first addition to OA! - Zanly - 10-02-2022 Hi! I'm new to Orion's Arm, but I'm already so enamored by it! It's almost everything that I always wanted out of sci-fi, and it apparently has existed since before I was even born! I've been hanging out around the official OAUP Discord server, and I've been posting many drafts of my story ideas there. The following is the latest draft of my two main stories about asperns (the Name X stuff is just placeholder names): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f9VDFoMsJknmJj-PFLFH9H5w1CRt72yyuTVNZsyseXc/edit?usp=sharing Keep in mind that this is just a summary, because I plan on making a webcomic out of these two stories, along with new articles (and edits to existing articles) on Encyclopaedia Galactica. There will also be plenty of lore about what asperns even are, and how they behave, etc etc. RE: My (hopefully) first addition to OA! - Worldtree - 10-02-2022 welcome to the forums! feel free to have a look around, see the creative writing section, etc a webcomic sounds interesting! RE: My (hopefully) first addition to OA! - Worldtree - 10-02-2022 From the google doc zanley Wrote:Elevating Ants - SUMMARY DRAFT 1 RE: My (hopefully) first addition to OA! - Worldtree - 10-02-2022 The virch, now called “Asperch”, contained a single planet (dubbed “Aspernia”), surrounded by a fake sky 100 km above mean sea level -no need to say a fake sky when the entire planet isn't "real" or at least, not embodied in matter. The sky can be simulated in the minds of the inhabitants, and the simulation, so it could be just as real -but still constructed- as their hands and feet and memories , in a virtual sense. Also if it matters to mention it , I’m guessing mentioning any specific voxel size isn’t that useful as a measurement of how detailed a simulation is? ah but the actual simulation origin was unknown. sure that works -for the origin of the simulation, maybe add some unknown possible canidates, with no real confirmation . my 2nd Favorite option is 'unknown origin'... but "unknown origin with 7 unconfirmed conspiracy theories about what the origin might be" can have more drama zanley Wrote:After realizing that he couldn't communicate effectively with non-sophont animals, Waywow decided that he would need some help.Waywow teamed up with Transapient X, the caretaker god of Planet X, in order to try to provolve every single sentient lifeform on Planet X. Waywow planned on then convincing the newly sophont life that they don't need to hurt each other anymore.The problem was, Transapient X wasn't very careful while mass-provolving animals. This led to all sorts of medical and mental issues in the provolves, most of which being quite alarming and inhumane. I think a trasapient would not have issues being careful about provolving- and you don't even need transapients to do that either. Just a society of dedicated modosophonts... who could still mess up or deliberately make choices that don't turn out so well. A frequent theme in the setting , I think is 'the unintended consequences of automation' so you could play with that. And they don't need to provolve every animal- maybe just some of them... or they could be -trying- to provolve the entire ecosystem and then they fail because they're at a point where that's still very difficult to do... or they fail for any number of reasons- the least of which might just be because this is a very complex task. anyway, this could still lead to higher minds/transapients of the solar dominion or some other faction still having a battle ... RE: My (hopefully) first addition to OA! - Worldtree - 10-02-2022 https://discord.com/channels/313774601677307914/313774601677307914/1025974995685486672 Just noting Half this conversation is happening on discord and that if we do continue more on the forums to move this over to the Creative writing forum RE: My (hopefully) first addition to OA! - MacGregor - 10-02-2022 Welcome to OA! Looking forward to seeing more of your work. Cheers! RE: My (hopefully) first addition to OA! - Drashner1 - 10-03-2022 Hi - Welcome to the forums! Regarding what you have so far in your summary, a few thoughts: a) What happened to Araash? E basically committed genocide, which seems unlikely to endear em to anyone. Was e punished? Died in the explosion? Committed suicide? Got away? Something else? b) How did the virtual world and its inhabitants come to have the names they did? I'm assuming they were named by those who discovered it, but that isn't currently clear. c) It's not currently clear how the inhabitants of the virch could achieve any technology or civilization at all if they were neither sentient nor sophont. This will need considerable explanation. d) It's not currently clear how or why Waywow would be considered a 'murderer' while being non-sentient/non-sophont. Are you saying that e was a predator and that e came to define predation as murder or something else? Ok, I think that covers things for now. Hope this helps and looking forward to future developments and discussions. Todd RE: My (hopefully) first addition to OA! - Rynn - 10-04-2022 It would be good to post this in the relevant subforum and to post the body text to the forum rather than a google doc. This will ensure that more people see it and will provide a history of article development. Currently you could edit or delete that doc which would make the comment chain nonsensical |