03-29-2024, 01:11 AM
(This post was last modified: 03-29-2024, 01:12 AM by stevebowers.)
(03-29-2024, 12:20 AM)totos_totidis Wrote: With regards to the dumbo article, I would remove this sentence entirely:Actually I think I'll keep Todd's sentence as is. It is useful sometimes to give a short synopsis of a concept on the page itself, rather than a hyperlink.
"Ultratech is defined as ultra-advanced technology that can nevertheless be built, used and understood by modosophont tech-users"
Instead, I would add a hyperlink to the word "ultratech" in the first sentence.
Quote:Aside from that it is generally good. Here is the draft with minor changes (mostly grammatical):But I'll use the rest of your version - thanks!