Proof-reading EG

[Drashner1]

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4a13ee2483366
Wormhole Termini

The final sentence
Passage through the hole, even in a modern vessel, takes at least thirty-two days, so these stacked craft can have a long wait. In periods of heavy traffic the Transition region around such a small 'hole may hold hundreds, or thousands of vessels waiting to pass through.

probably should be followed by a mention of the amount of wait time involved rather than letting the reader figure it out: 1000x32 = 32,000 days = ~100 years. In other words, consider a flat-space trip instead of using the congested wormhole.

Actually, it isn't obvious to me to what extent several craft can be transiting a wormhole during that 32-day interval, but presumably a 100 year wait isn't impossible.

The last section in the article doesn't really work. A small wormhole such as is being discussed would not be so busy and would be expanded accordingly as traffic increased. For that matter, the most common wormhole Throat size is about a kilometer radius, which allows for a good bit of room to play. I also don't recall any discussions about the volume of traffic the Nexus might handle or how busy a given WH might be. So the numbers here are almost certainly just a WAG.

Until this can actually be addressed with real information, I've removed the last couple of sentences from the article.

Todd