12-01-2015, 05:24 AM
After a month-long absence, I hereby return to my proofreading duties xD
On the Triangulum Transmission article:
"infrared emissions of G,K, and M class stars "
methinks this should be "G, K and M-class stars"
Also: the article mentions that Triangulum civ has existed for 15k years - I think this should be changed to establish that it existed for this long at the time the Transmission was sent out. In Y11K, after all, Triangulum civilisation has existed (assuming it still does in some recognizable form) for more than two million years. ;p
On the Triangulum Transmission article:
"infrared emissions of G,K, and M class stars "
methinks this should be "G, K and M-class stars"
Also: the article mentions that Triangulum civ has existed for 15k years - I think this should be changed to establish that it existed for this long at the time the Transmission was sent out. In Y11K, after all, Triangulum civilisation has existed (assuming it still does in some recognizable form) for more than two million years. ;p
James Rogers, Professional Idiot